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J.F.K. (Free verse) by thing1

petite long black and pink fur coat over a black sweater and ashy black jeans pale face illuminated by faded brick red lipstick framed by black oval plastic rimmed glasses three inch high boots support her tiny mass trying to recreate a model's messy hair two grey streaks placed in the front of her new doo her daughter long-haired and round-faced with a cute little pink flower dress carrying her coat the woman pushes her red, pink, black,and white rolling carry-on a green fuzzy object sits on top a hat? a purse? london departure ar 8:30a.m. an asian cruella deville

nentwined 8-Apr-04/4:55 PM
I don't understand this at all, especially the ending and the title. The flow is smooth, the descriptions decent, but the content has passed me by.




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