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Daddy's Little Girl (Free verse) by daveslady

I know I haven't said it lately, and I don't say it enough, But Thank You for all you have done. You love me even when I'm bad Keep me from harm whenever possible You're that little voice inside telling me what to do and where to go You make me feel warm and safe inside Loved like an only child You love me so much that you have created this magnificent place for me to live Just for me to enjoy and to remember how much you care about me Everything is as beautiful as you could have created it, you gave me my senses to enjoy your offering. Thank you for taking care of my mother and my daughter, and for the idea of being able to see them again one day. There are no words to describe how awesome you are The fact that you have never walked away from me no matter how hard I try to pull away. There you are right beside me, arms open wide begging just to hold me. I love you with my life, which is really all I have to give. Thank you for being my Dad, and I hope to make you proud with the things I do and say. I will try my best, but please remember that I am only human and will mess up often I can't wait for the day that you and I are reunited and I can come live with you forever. You are my loving Father... and I thank you for that

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3-Apr-04/3:09 PM
Somebody who actually was stronger wouldn't need to tell themselves they were stronger. Telling yourself you're stronger is like telling yourself you can achieve anything if you set your heart on it: mealy-mouthed blubbering fiddle-faddle for spineless duncecombes to cling onto instead of facing the fact that the world isn't a special magical secret garden of faeyrieyes and smiling toadstools where everyone loves everyone else and they all write each other gushing friendship notes on Anne Geddes note-paper. Thanks!

Poeme review: Weepy prose with arbitrary line breaks =/= poetry.




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