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Pain (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower

Through my veins the cold heart pumps I feel your pains my veins now jump The pain The pain so real The cause so plain Yet you sit there acting sane The pain Just a glimpse of feeling on your face would satisfy my mind but to no avail you sit there staring into space I know you feel it I can too... Pain.

Blake 17-Aug-02/1:07 PM
Sparse, but effective.




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