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tears beyond hope (Free verse) by Mystifying

she calls him almost everyday and they talk about the deepest things hearing his voice makes her day he's the wind beneath her wings she counts on him more than he knows the guy is stable ground when she tells him things, they just flow and the love between them is so profound he makes her feel good everytime they speak and she enchants him so much he fell in love a day without eachother makes them weak then they see eachother again and have so much to speak of he says, "Baby I'll be there." and she knows that he will She's sure that he really does care and he has a place in her heart no one but him can fill and then another girl returns from his past of life this girl he cared so much for is cast aside the other girl had caused him so much strife but he still wanted her by his side so the sweet girl turned gloomny and gray and asked the boy,"What about us?" the boy didnt know what to say it took all her strength not to rage and cuss so she walked away defeated and alone from the only person she will ever love she walked in the suiting raging storm to her home alls she needed was that push and shove she got herself a rope, gone was the sweetness from her eyes she hung it high from the showerhead of the tub and it took her a moment to realize "I'm dying for unrequited love." He had went to her house the next day only to find the ajar he crept through the house fiding his way then called her name thinking she wasnt far as he stepped into the bathroom his knees nearly gave way he could still smell her perfume this is how she made him pay as they lowered her casket into the ground the tears came because he knew what she went through she gave him a love so beautiful and proud and alls he could think was,"I never loved her, I always loved you."

Venus 17-Aug-02/12:31 PM
Just perusing the Worst section for some giggles (thanks WFW & DA), and came across this literary masterpiece. I don't make a habit of commenting on pieces like this one, but I must say that this truly made me weep. 1/10 for the consistent usage of one of my all-time favorite words, 'alls'.




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