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love comes but once
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Free verse
) by
francis nor capule
love comes but once that much is true perhaps enough for me and you though flowers bloom and come to pass i pray and hope that this would last for its such a shame for this to pass without a trace without a trace
thepinkbunnyofdoom
2-Apr-04/10:02 AM
That is the sappiest thing I've ever read. To say the least its wretched. To say the most its honest but lacking in both the wonder that is love and the writing that is poetry. I hope this impressed your "lover" because thats the only person you should have shared this set of words with. This type of peom is whats known as a Pimple. I should know I've written alot of them before they even had it as a poem type. Read more verse. Good Verse. Then try writing. Exsamples here being -=Dark_Angel=- to show you shear verbal skill and intelligence, Godswife and Horus8(In his many different usernames) for depth, humor, and emotion. -2- Just because its honest, horrid, but honest.
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