Shuushin1 Apr 2004

not bad. a tad longer than it needs to be AND, I like to come to my own conclusions in a poem - without the author telegraphing what I should be perceiving.

Like telling me its a "picturesque scene" then proceeding to describe it to me. One or the other, preferrably the other.

Same thing with nature at its finest hour,
imparting a lesson in life - know what I mean, vern?