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A country called Cha (Free verse) by richa

The merchants could not say why char, unable to agree, whether the plantations or the country came first but they knew to trade was to trade in tea and ornaments that beared its leaf. The priests and lawyers, god knows how they entered the picture.

Shuushin 31-Mar-04/5:49 PM
Richa mein freund - I grow familiar with your Australian abstractions; good stuff.

nits-
"beared"? bore?
"entered the picture" - seems like a missed poetic opportunity.





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