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A country called Cha (Free verse) by richa

The merchants could not say why char, unable to agree, whether the plantations or the country came first but they knew to trade was to trade in tea and ornaments that beared its leaf. The priests and lawyers, god knows how they entered the picture.

SupremeDreamer 30-Mar-04/6:58 AM
In all honesty, this poem went beyond me leaky dome.. either its too abstract for me or it causes me to have a brain-fart, or I'm not applying my I.Q., therefor I shall refrain from voting.. perhaps you could explain it to me, most of your works I consider to be enjoyable mind benders, but every now and then I'm left feeling BENT.




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