Shuushin29 Mar 2004

Not bad vsuede.

I think you said "spell" one time too many, and you have a capital "A" where you don't want one.

This is one of those that I'm sometimes guilty of too though - it's pretty, has some clever language, but one walks away not quite knowing what it is about.

That's fine to an extent, but I don't think you got away with it here (at least with me).