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Wondering (Free verse) by anagram

How far away does one belong? How wide is the gulf between right and wrong? How far does love stretch careless of hate? Could it be tomorrow - turning up late? And where does one go,when the venue's not there? And do we return to our homelands elsewhere? And have we a life yet to be seen? And is tomorrow yesterday,that's ours unforeseen? Or do we perceive a line that's so bent? Or do we believe that we're all heaven sent? Or do we accept that when our time's through? We'll all play the harp,on clouds - out of view. CSN 3/85.

anagram 16-Aug-02/8:44 PM
So sorry to have to have inspired such ire Tarq. (hope you don't mind me calling you Tarq.).That is twice you have had a go at my rhyming ability without explaining the reason for your low opinion.Please expand,I would be grateful. I have read 1 or 2 of yours which were open verse, do you just dislike true poetry that rhymes or can you not catch on to the cadence.




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