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Untitled *involves taking pills and cutting with razors* (Free verse) by AskittlesK

the razors sharp the pills make my heart race I'm alone on this dark base. No one sees my pain No one sees the scars No one sees my brain activly controlling my thoughts and fears my life of tears. I'm falling I'm dizzy I'm sizzling as I get busy. sitting on my wrist is my razor full of blood a fountain of tears flood. The pills take charge My heart speeds up. I'm falling onto the floor passing by my life passing out passing any chance that I will get up.

AskittlesK

21-Mar-04/3:59 PM

o thats alright... i cut myself on and off...sometimes...mostly just for about a year now..
Yeah this poem relates to that and i got suspended like a little less than 2 weeks ago for taking a perscription antidepressant that wasn't mine. And that day when I came home being suspended and it was kind of late and i cut my self and it started bleeding and everything then i just dabbed it on paper. Then I have a feeling I passed out on my bed.. cuz i don't remember falling asleep but i remember waking up. I'm not sure what exactly happended.. But yeah now I'm going to a chemical counsular at school *cuz i have too* .. its a really long story.. but like 20 people got caught with perscription pills that weren't theres. And well since i have to see the chemical counsular for 30 min during 1st per. I think she might then find out that i cut. idk tho
yeah i like poemranker too and other poem sites!
well g2g
-Angie

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