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Thank-you, outside (Free verse) by fevriere

Thank-you, outside For listening For not speaking You showed- Your faces showed Eyes of a milliard caressing greens Skies of blue Blank walls, the frills of frond and tendrils Those hot pinks Each one would tap on the bus window Like ivy branches, with fruitless fingers O you gave Regardless of anything You gave For this My heart grows wordless and wild

fevriere 18-Mar-04/9:57 AM
I like milliard. I hope it exists sensibly, unlike the background of the poem. Thanks for that, I hadn't noticed how surfaceful it was.




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