SupremeDreamer13 Mar 2004

Yeah, that pretty much informed me of what I knew not.. now I just need to figure what to use to get that meter right and not screw the sound of it.. I'll figure that out later on and post a second version, that or start a fresh one with attention to meter. Its a slight crutch I have; if I don't start out with meter in mind I get stuck correcting later in frustration.

Oh, did I apply the apostrophe's correctly? thats all. Thank you for explaining it to me.