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Brethren (Free verse) by richa

The trick of the dandelion clock: To disperse in the wind, grey seeds to interchange like girls, plain as a sugar's beet, that dance, each hiding a Newton.

zodiac 12-Mar-04/9:00 AM
Isn't there supposed to be a second 's' on the last line? And shouldn't the second 'p' in the third line be moved to the first line? And is 'PAPLESS' really a word - and if so, what does it all mean?




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