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Was it Me?? (Free verse) by ga_writer

How could you do what you did today? You said your love was here, it would never go away. I thought the both of us would last, Until these heartbreaks of mine were cast. When I looked into your eyes, my life had meaning, Now, inside, It’s like I have no feeling. My heart was yours for so long, I don’t know now how I can go on. You were my angel sent from above, Sent here for me to shower you with my love. I will love you my whole life and beyond, What I feel for you now, it is so strong. There is something I need to know before I leave, Was it me?

BrandonW 7-Mar-04/10:49 PM
I know the general feeling I think your trying to convey with this poem, and maybe the inspiration for the other ones. I think your poems are decent, they have potential though.. Maybe think of revising. Its good to see other Ga writers though.. - 5




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