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Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

She talks quietly with the elderly couple, seeming healthy except for her rubberized hands: Small bendable fingers, look alikes, no fancy prosthetics, stainless hooks, or muscle triggers. It took both of her hands to manuever the fork just to pick a single beet slice. I watched her a moment more, paid the bill, and went outside to watch a father showing his son how to hold a stone for skipping.

INTRANSIT 6-Mar-04/1:06 PM
I mean you are too good at poetry to waste your time or talents here. I hope this finds its way into the chipper where it belongs.(the poem) I am a "part time" poet. Do I need a black and yellow label? HEY ZZINNIA!! Make warning labels besides the wing things!!!!!




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