dodgersfan23 Mar 2004

don't mean to come off as very critical but do you know what an apostrophe is? youre, ill, etc...they all have apostrophes. also, "alwayz" is spelt with an 's' somewhere in there.

"when i need 2 be alone" to

the content is there, but maybe try and fix some grammatical errors, because this is just like reading an AIM conversation, without the reader's response.

-8- because the poem, though unoriginal (horus8 will tell you that i have no right to say that), is still well put together and communicated