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Early Morning (Free verse) by fevriere

This is how God feels insulated warmth Thickly shaking off dream feathers Blessed timeless blisses Yesterday is an unread chain my skin illiterate & numb. Hungry & dim. Cotton womb aglow insolar Do I dream, wake, wonder? Time returns. The senseless tick Of the clock, is a sequence, a sentence. Bit, bit, I recall The feeling of living skin skin I live in. In the record of my flesh, I find yesterday. I mourn the ignorance of bodilessness. If only I was a feathered angel I was a dream

zodiac 3-Mar-04/12:33 PM
Based on solely my own (and pretty subjective) experience, I'd say amateur web-posted poetry is currently unpunctuated more often than it is correctly punctuated, and that published poetry is more often punctuated correctly etc etc etc. So it depends on what you're conforming to.




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