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Pop the Pill (Free verse) by etherealmaiden

Headache, heartache Heartache, headache How can I make them dissolve? Pop the pill Pop one more Pop one just for my heart The drugs take effect But the pain is still there It just won't go away So I pop the pill Do it again Take them just for fun The headache stops My vision clouds But the hand keeps moving Pop, pop, pop I'm drowning in drugs But the wound is still open And the pills keep coming Pop one Pop another Pop two at once All feeling gone But tears are falling Pain pressed to the extreme Pop three pills Tip the bottle over No more pills to pop My reality's blurred But not the pain As the bottle tumbles down Blackness

etherealmaiden 3-Mar-04/10:11 AM
By write it for myself i mean to get it out of my system not to keep it locker away although that's what i did with most of it until a few years ago. oh well...thanks for the compliment hidden in there though... i'll try not to bludgeon you too much more.




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