poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Early Morning by fevriere.

fevriere2 Mar 2004

The capitalisation is like an unpunctualised way to give emphasis, like started sentences that finish from unfinished ones.

I know the thing with God is a big step, but it feels careless and reckless and brazen and besides I only really care about God. I can't think of anything else.. I guess, "This is how Gold/Good/flame feels".. I think they'd be weak openings. What does it feel like, first thing in the morning, when you're still a little sleep-drunk and dozy?