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School girls lovely school girls (Free verse) by ==Doylum

Bless her cotton panties and skirts so short and tight and the memorys that it gives me when I'm all alone at night Bless her cotton panties and the long legs that i see and the gym knickers so delightful they don't help me with my P.E. Bless her cotton panties when they hang upon the line so that i can take them down and have a lovely sticky time Bless her cotton panties a sign so young and pure. That i've never got anywhere near them a sign my obsession shows for sure

Robert K Foster 16-Aug-02/5:22 AM
there are some disrupted rhythms here (such as "anywhere" in 2nd to last line),you've got a potentially good sounding poem, as long as you don't let your pervesrion cloud your craft. (and it is "memories")




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