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School (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower

Today was the first day of school. Tonight I won't play pool. Cause the place i go is 18 and up and you have to go late when the bouncer is fucked up. Heh. My hair is bright red. I wish I were dead. My life is shot to hell. Damn that tardy bell. I missed it, and already I'm egging summer on. I saw my old crush. My lunches are mush. Best friend vanished. Hope I won't get banished for my bright red hair.

Venus 15-Aug-02/10:36 PM
Keep it up 8/10




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