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the wind's last crescendo (Free verse) by fair12

summer, and the air was warm like breath in an August bayou rain the front room sterile, but for the music stand, and the notes the wind would carry twelve strings and a rhythm of memories, fading like the last notes of childhood yesterday still lingers softly in the alcove’s of our souls, pulling at our heart’s songs, seeking that child who once learned to sing

richa 24-Feb-04/2:19 PM
Has a nice poetic feel, which is not always such a bad thing.

Pleasant, and has a finished feel to it.




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