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Upon the Battlefield (Free verse) by cleverdevice

A young Apollo, golden haired, Stands dreaming on the verge of strife. Magnificently unprepared For the long littleness of life. He has no cause to want life his own, His is but a short part to play. Yet when called, he shall dethrone And leave for fields far away. His naive duty shows no bounds, His will is there for else to course And when he faces warring hounds His thoughts and cries shall there be forced To think of life as it was lived, To dream of love, as he was loved. To cherish, hold, recieve and give His mortal, everlasting blood (the first stanza of this poem was written by Frances Cornford, not me.)

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Feb-04/5:10 AM
On 13th Feb jasondingus credited 'your' poeme with an -10-. From 13th Feb to 23rd Feb you balmilised yourself in that -10-, basking in its splendour and revelling in the credit you took from it. Unless you can prove that you gain'd no pleasure from that vote before your admission of the 'borrowed' 1st verse on 23rd Feb, I'm afraid your jodhpurs will remain at half-mast. A belated admission of guilt simply will not do, since it is like stealing some money but only apologising after you have squander'd it on a vast collection of antique digital watches and Thundercats quilts. -10-




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