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Upon the Battlefield (Free verse) by cleverdevice

A young Apollo, golden haired, Stands dreaming on the verge of strife. Magnificently unprepared For the long littleness of life. He has no cause to want life his own, His is but a short part to play. Yet when called, he shall dethrone And leave for fields far away. His naive duty shows no bounds, His will is there for else to course And when he faces warring hounds His thoughts and cries shall there be forced To think of life as it was lived, To dream of love, as he was loved. To cherish, hold, recieve and give His mortal, everlasting blood (the first stanza of this poem was written by Frances Cornford, not me.)

cleverdevice 24-Feb-04/4:05 AM
I never intended to pass all this poem off as my own, hence the admission (I wasn't exactly ridden with guilt, shaking and sweating fearing God's wrath). Just because I didn't chose to use quotation marks doesn't mean its plagiarism all of a sudden. To plagiarise:'' to use another person's idea or a part of their work and pretend that it is your own'', freeserve online dictionary, ''to take and use as one's own, the thoughts, writings or inventions of another'' - Shorter Oxford English Dictionary, ''to take ideas writings, etc. from another and pass them off as one's own'' - Collins Concise English Dictionary. Now how does that relate to this phrase quoted from above? '' the first stanza is not mine...I cannot take credit for it''. I have not, do not and will not take credit for the first stanza, so how can I be plagiarising when the definition is to pass off other's works as my own? Regardless of what punctuation devices are used in the body of the poem. Cock.




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