poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on the wind's last crescendo by fair12.

Shuushin23 Feb 2004

Verry sweeet. Touching without a trace of sappiness - surprised myself at the reaction.

well done.

I'm going to suggest, despite my liking it very much, that you replace "summer" with something more specific (either a particular day or a month). My immediate reaction was "overused word" - but you quickly pulled me into the body to forget.