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autumn gold (Free verse) by lexicon

Drifting off, Sleep felt like Autumn gold: a final turning; the last movement; the last sigh; the last pain or pleasure preceding a long silence; long awaited, anticipated, earned.

Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/5:52 PM
Autumn gold is a lovely image and the first quarter of the poem is blissfully peaceful, but then it seriously declines in quality. 4. This is a waste. I'm upset.




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