poemranker ::Replying

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anonymous5 Apr 2002

bravo!! i really like! everything except the last line flows! i would suggest that for the last stanza, you just repeat the last line:

and i'll tell you
nothing's been the same
nothing's been the same

i got confused about it whenyou said"not the same since then". what were you talking about?