poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on If When We Die by lynnkyle.

savagemikel13 Feb 2004

It's a lovely sentiment.
I like the writing of the first part better than the second part.
Finally, I can't avoid the logical bump that you are wishing the person you speak of dead before you though. ;-)
Which just leaves me with this crystalization... I love you and I want you dead. ;-)
No offense I hope. I really enjoy so much of it.