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Nowhere but now (Free verse) by phbiscuit

Nowhere but now here with these last few hours and this setting sun by the drinking trees soaking the breath and the minutes like water for life falling and failing these summer-soft moments throwing us back to the grass-bed holding on where we know we will never be again with dew drops growing beside and beneath the forms we have sunk into the bent-sole grass for these last few failing hours.

richa 12-Feb-04/11:37 AM
Good, short lines are always difficult as the break should serve a purpose.




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