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Lifes work (Free verse) by richa

The dumb squirrel has again tilted the earth, a clod-footed geranium's ear bends to bedrock, a boneless body once more to be buried up to its neck in soil. The squirrel looks on like a boxer, his tiny claws up, hiding his chin.

zodiac 10-Feb-04/11:20 AM
I don't like the repetition of again. Probably just my taste, though.




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