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Some people don't know when to quit (Free verse) by Joe-joe
Jane ran up the slippery slope
And slid back down like she had
1000 times before.
She changed shoes
She altered her stride
She invested in a rocket-propelled back-pack
But the result was always the same;
Jane laying face down kissing the canyon floor.
One summer day Jane arrived at a new angle.
Born from the remnants of an old rubber tube
That lay in waste on the valley floor
Spurred on by a coyote and her feathered friend
She anchored each end to an old oak tree
Tip-toed back and stretched the cord to its limit,
then jumped>>>>>>>>
Her feet and arms waved incessantly
Her hitchhiked mane raced from certain doom
That snap that seemed to propel her towards her freedom
Still echoed through the tired old ravine
As poor Jane once again landed face down
At the foot of the canyon door.
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