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The Weight of Words and the Meaning in the Wind (Free verse) by somemorepoetry

Under the traintracks By an old box of Marlboro's I'll find something to read There's a story through the thunder That I'm dying to tell Except that I'm a close whisper Cowering with these pictures Painted on my mind By summers when we were Tall grass Waving in the wind Easy and free Now I feel heavy Beneath these stones A single blade curling Through gravel Towards the shaking day With a shovel I'll find you Going downward Since you cannot see Don't sit quiet there Laugh when I tell a joke Cry when I say something sad There's nothing in a story Unless you react We'll grow together Until these tracks crack and fall apart Then we'll be free again Swaying softly Letting our stories Be the wind

SupremeDreamer 4-Feb-04/10:11 PM
Its looks like a theraputic journal entry. Could have used these title(s) instead:

"A patients written letter of grievance to his therapist" (or: 'infantile contempt for ones salaried shrink')




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