poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Cold Rain Road by middenHeap.

lastobelus29 Jan 2004

You're right, the "but" is entirely unnecessary.

I think your right about steel cubes too, but I haven't anything better to mind. I'll have to think about it.

It was written at different times, almost everything I write is, sometimes with years in between additions.

I also think I want to ditch soul in the third line, and just say "Knows me for my similarity." Whaddya think?