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I don't fit in (Free verse) by devina

I'm so deppresed, don't know what to do. I feel so alone, I wish I knew. Where everyone is, what everyone do. I miss my friends, I wish they knew. I don't fit in here, in this new place. In my heart it's an empty space. I made some choices in my life, I made a lot of mistakes. But do I have to pay for them forever? And now I'm sitting here, in this whole new place. I don't fit in, I'm all alone. Will it be like this forever? I wish I knew. I hate this place, it's a whole knew space. I just don't fit in.

Santeria 29-Jan-04/10:21 AM
i know that many people call this a "Teen Angst" poem or what not...i think it is good...i belive that poetry is poetry, and people shouldnt say what you should be writting or what you shouldnt...this is just my opinion but i find poems to be what ever the hell your feeling, a lot of people can relate or not to those feelings so i think you should keep pouring your heart out no matter what people say...it's YOUR poem...
NOT theirs!




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