poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Ghost by lastobelus.

lastobelus28 Jan 2004

yeah, it's pretty sappy, eh? I wrote it on a napkin in the Hari Krishna temple in Laguna Beach at one of their huge weekly dinners.

The one part I like is "I vibrate in the strings between stars/and have become a throat of the sun."

I'm not sure it's a pimple, though, just sappy. I've another sappy pome from the same evening that I'll post later.