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Grieving (Free verse) by d35

His inner eye wouldn’t stop crying A sorry sight to see tears dripping down metaphysical cheeks He loved it better when he couldn’t feel why can’t he cut this loose disassemble it bury it in the cold grown covered in a wet dew Running away doesn’t help when will it die? when will he? his thought saturated the cold sweat of depression a colorless rose made of thorns no use throwing it away will just prick the skin of his emotion what's going to save him? “oh it hurts inside, when will we die?”

Goad 24-Jan-04/3:40 PM
really? I thought they meant gown. You know, after they cut this loose [off the corpse], they bury it [wrapped up] in the [corpse's] cold gown. Makes more sense, don't you think? I think it's pretty clear the pome is about the fevered thoughts of a serial killer.




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