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Drying, Cracked Roots (Free verse) by AnotherNothing

Drying, cracked roots Hold up the pathetic tree Simply surviving in a place No one cares to see Every day the constant trial To endure the steady sun, But gradually understanding Nothing more can be done Suffering harrowing days and nights Until the cycle begins again, More painful is the knowing of All that could have been Nameless on the dusty road No one will see the trees Finally wither in a place Never meant to be.

AnotherNothing 23-Jan-04/6:24 PM
Thanks for the comments. The original theme would be poverty, but really extends to anything that survives under unlikely and fruitless conditions. I know i messed up in the middle, but this was a long time ago, and i pretty much just gave up.




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