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regrets (Other) by kthulah

where was i when you were swimming deeply for that perfect pearl many silken lips pried open shut again to seek once more seems that both of us had given in to that numbskullian game you ran left and i ran righteous intersecting panic strikes lose ourselves in mental circling wolves with fragile teeth of rue if we are but glancing briefly this will keep us safe from lo... garotted by our own morals on our deathbeds we shall say he was busy she was married unborn happy angels stayed

<~> 8-Aug-02/7:24 AM
sane? no. changed, yes. i have tried to express this, but i always feel like it comes out trite, so it stays in my notebook, where it belongs. this is masterful. kudos.




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