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At The Station (Free verse) by Christof

Here, full of people Going somewhere or nowhere, Either hustling for connections Or loitering with a Tennant's Or the old dear collecting for terminal patients, Here I find in the formaldehyde Of damp yellow light one dwelling thing That needs neither ticket nor vending machine: Moss, like a comic moustache That's slipped from above a bank clerk's grin And counts us rattling out and in, The loose change in the collector's tin.

Christof 22-Jan-04/6:48 AM
I see what you mean, but here I say, unusually for me, bugger grammar. It would ruin the flow. Anyway, who's to say that there's more than one person loitering with their Tennant's? Gah, I hate it when someone finds my grammatical shortcomings. And I wasn't thinking really of Damien Hirst, but I can see why you think I might. The man's cornered the cultural market in embalming.




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