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Victory smokes & black tiger ambrosia (Free verse) by Don-Quixote

The rumors are true; our rogue torch kissed the sky 'n whispered adieu with its scarlet flame sigh. Tuesdays spent with sibyl foretold that even tigers will purr; a killers sly smile appears subtle eclipsing the wicked saboteur. A rejected opaline rose choked wilting on a citrus veranda; I watched it die and smoked as petals veiled the sycamore floor. We've been rollin down groove street smokin on victory 'n o.d.ing on fresh injections of complacency and bitter vinegar defeat. Sunday suns blaze humid on this dirt road of loathing that I travel upon, intrepid- murderous red lips cursing; drinking black ambrosia groovin to the blue-collar blues 'n rollin sublime nimbus spliffs. Night tigers softly purr as we growl in victory; the wicked saboteurs grinning in sweet revery of our preys vinegar defeat. Fangs kiss bloody flesh 'n whisper sweet adieu with my fervid devil sigh; the last kiss before you die.

SupremeDreamer 13-Jan-04/9:36 AM
1: your right, its sour. But honestly, bitter, sour, don't they both convey to anyone without brainwave activity that "IT TASTES BAD??"

2: *fart*

3: *fart*

4: Well, it doesn't interest you ofcourse, and incoherence is always the case when I haven't bothered to spell things out for you in detail (I figure some readers can use some of their imagination and impart their own meaning... etc etc but we've had this conversation before, so anyway..)

5: Cmon now, you might be using the title "everyone", but don't start thinking that you actually know what people do to celebrate victory.. and the hobos I know? burb sour beer and pass out rather than growl.

6: the connection between blue-collar blues and growling.. isn't a concept thats too hard to grasp. (denial? etc etc, really DO I HAVE TO EXPLAIN? No. And I won't.)

7: Your welcome, whatever helps that frustration of yours.

And HOLY JESU!?!

YOU LOVE IT!!!

Thanks for the ten.

Toodles.




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