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Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) (Free verse) by middenHeap

In the time of the cherry blossoms, without warning The sky turns leaden and opens Slurries of western words, driven like snow Swirl through the sullen petals Turning the careful fractal economy of beauty Into sodden masses of pink, run through with Carbon from the exhausts of a million cars. Neon glints in the wet bark, black Beetles scrabble furiously to avoid drowning. A ragged asiatic man reels in the road and ends sitting With a thud against a cherry trunk Blooded by obfuscation. He splays his fingers on the ice-wet asphalt, Palms sliding in the flower flesh Considers speaking, weighing every word A sacrifice against the precision of thought. Instead he is silent, each sweet sentence Receding away unspoken like the long rows Of precisely-planted trees, The fuel of reverie.

middenHeap 11-Jan-04/7:27 PM
pardon me, which term are you using loosely, 'HOLY' or 'FUCK'? Are you accusing me of being a loose-holed fuck?

The ego-boost is gratis, everyone deserves a pat on the back once and a while. And it is true that you spue better than I, I must bow to your spewing. I spew neither so vociferously nor desultorily as you. Alas, as I grow older I find fewer and fewer of my thoughts to be truly spueworthy. Whereas before I spawned an almost continuous spew of words like a cat in heat hosing furniture, now I must carefully hoard my literary sputum, and more often as not it simply dries in a thin metaphorical glaze over my dessicated metaphorical palate. Age, it sucks. I have so many liver spots now that you can't even make out my van halen tatoo.




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