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Faith (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

I tell you secrets behind closed doors. I tell you I think that life is a bore. You preach to me like some small child. I am wrong, you say. Life is still good. God will help you. I laugh at you, and you frown. Really? Well, where was your God when my innocence died? All those years ago. Still a child. Where was your God then to protect me? Obviously he was too busy to help... Me. Your God is a lie! Your God is a fake! Will you now burn me at the stake? For telling you the truth. Ah, truth! Do you get it now? Your God never cared! Your God was never real! Understanding like a shot from a gun.

SupremeDreamer 6-Jan-04/2:52 PM
All of a sudden your a victim of child abuse?

Bullshit. Perhaps your mental gears are batty 'n disfunctional, or my reasoning is shitty, BUT:

If you are a victim of child molestation, how are you completely unable to sympathize with Pervy Elf's poem? God believing or not, as a victim you should be able to relate to his anger and disbelief.

Instead you berate Pervy Elf for his lack of faith, saying that what happened to him happened because mans weak faith allows evil to do its dirty work?

Was it your weak faith that lead to your molestation fair12? Was it your punishment for not having the correct amount of strength in your faith?

You also say that god was there "not allowing evil to take the final step", when Pervy's angst exists because "god" DIDN'T prevent evil from taking the final step... Your reaction to this poem made no sense what-so-ever.

Did god prevent your molestation? Or did he leave you to be molested when you were just a child?

Let me answer that for you:

GOD WASN'T DOING ANYTHING-
And he wasn't doing anything because the theistic concept of an all-powerful "being" is bullshit;
a product of mans need to make himself secure by putting faith in a psychological "divine father-figure and protector".

In my opinion christians convolute their religion to turn it into nothing more than a fancy "teddy bear". (Which ofcourse is one reason they have no insightful knowledge or understanding of the bible, the other reason is that they give no thought as to the interpretation of the text or its meaning, but accept their undoubted literal interpretation/meaning.)


And about DA being offensive? He isn't. He's being blunt and to the point, and that offends you- it also makes you angry since he makes you look stupid.


YOUR FIRST RESPONSE TO PERVY'S POEM HOWEVER?


Was offensive, mean-spirited, and absurd; a hurtful way for you to get revenge for pervy criticising/belittling god while voicing his disbelief.

Over-all? Your full of shit: A fucking moron.

And in my opinion, a shameless liar.




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