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Love (Free verse) by Pervy Elf

It hurts, doesn't it? To know that the person you want, wants another. And no matter what you may do, nothing will change that. Care as much as you can, but you will still come up short. Fool yourself into believing he cares for you. And in that one instant, your world(heart) will crumble to pieces. All your fears and suspicions become concrete. You will never be the same. Nothing can ever be the same. But you defy that voice that tells you not to care. All you will get is pain. Fool, you won't listen will you? It hurts, doesn't it? To love someone...who doesn't love you.

little_big_nose 5-Jan-04/6:19 PM
totally right, it sux big time




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