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Just-Average-Zongs-Zung (Free verse) by tralala42001

blow moon blow/and round up your circles/inhale the swollen neck/escape through whispers that moan/ swerve and float through landscapes of time/ and mountains of water vapor/ angelic wrinkled fingers/ opened legs/ with accented curves/ pitched up voices/ and low monotones/ permanent ink/ and flowers with old blossoms/ reach the ground/ and undoubtedly inspired cleared liquid/ gun:and:needle

INTRANSIT 4-Jan-04/9:38 AM
Hmmm. Your moniker suggests something juvenile. Your topics don't. I would suggest combining this with the other (8 minutes). The good morning simply needs more material. Wear your safety belt. It can be a rough ride around these parts.




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