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Haiku 2004 (Haiku) by Princess_Snowflake

The new year is here When the things turn new And when we are respectful

richa 3-Jan-04/11:54 AM
You seem to have put effort into getting the syllable count correct. Unfortunately it should be 5-7-5 not 5-5-7.

Personally I would say abandon the syllable counting and just write something in the spirit of haiku.

This poem is by no stretch of the imagination a haiku, but nevertheless I find it cute.




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