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New Leaf (Lyric) by dragonfly

As does the fog of the bay creep he comes to blanket me and all my usual worries do not matter now as I revel in the beauty that lies in the sight of him asleep And so the walls I built erode to debris My only defense is a pile at my feet I'm turning a new leaf He drifts along in the upsweep of a stream that empties into me and he takes refuge in my keep and all my usual worries do not matter now as I'm watching him asleep And so the walls I built erode to debris My only defense is a pile at my feet And this is a battle I will not retreat I'm turning a new leaf

richa 2-Jan-04/12:47 PM
Kind of pretty. Sight of him asleep is a bit worn though. And what has leaves got to do with anything.

Good though.




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