SupremeDreamer28 Dec 2003

Resigned? Shes englufed in the metaphorical "devils breath" quivering in "odium" (hate coupled with disgust + state of disgrace) and emotionally abandoned by her faith.

The mood isn't really resigned- but I did make the beginning a calm explaination of the reasons for the ending- giving the ending a more passionate feel with the violence blunty conveyed, along with a quick short upfront conclusion.

I guess it doesn't have the expected effect on all of the readers.. ;/ trial and error- poetry is always a learning process.