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Death & the Twisted Tree (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer

Once death glared at me stooped in a corner- cobwebs encircled his brow; the crown of a vampire. I stared back without blinking; brazened him mirthfully. He smiled then winked before fading into the walls. That day I set sail for the black sea; the waters churned threatening to subvert me. An island in the middle of a storm was my destination, and there I met the tree of time who was a master of rhyme twisted and coiled around illusion. It showed me perpetual roads interconnected, with numerous forks; a path of emotions and realities changing constantly, cycling through innumerous outcomes- it said "Everything that can happen has already- the choice we have is to create from these a path of our own, a fate that sets us free." I told it of death- the end of the road and the tree laughed. "He fades as if only dream- a necessary illusion. A mans reality stagnates and becomes irksome; he must be tricked into thinking he has ended then made anew- so he can feel the magic and beauty of life once again. There is no end to these roads; they are as twisted and coiled as I am." I remember these words from the day my boat sailed the ebony sea; the day I stared death down- life's magic hasn't stagnated since and death doesn't haunt my corner anymore.

SupremeDreamer 17-Dec-03/12:57 PM
Ohh. I'm devastated.

One: the struggle had nothing to do with mankind, it had to do with ME.

But obviously you missed that while skimming through my writing and cooking up some insulting comment.

And how nice, again you mentioned intelligence- as if calling me a moron a thousand times accomplishes anything.

Fuck mankind. You missed the goddamn point entirely you twit. Why don't you try swinging in the air somewhere else?




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