Replying to a comment on:

Me, myself and I. (Free verse) by darby pyn

The unexpected mind is open for surprises. lean forward, bend the grip of sanity to focus on the invisible reward. feel the rigid grip loosen like discarded chewing gum. used and without flavor. be prepared for life’s tests. it’s an open wound, a reminder of my frailty. I’m the enemy my mother warned me about.

sliver 15-Dec-03/7:57 PM
Well, I liked it.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001